Following the contents page draft post, here is an audience feedback on the page. This time instead of asking a female audience like I did on my magazine cover feedback, I have asked a male audience to see whether they have identified my specified target audience.
Overall, the feedback was positive with the font and layout repeatedly mentioned a few times. Mr Matthews has identified that the line dividing the page in the middle "gives a sense of symmetry" therefore making the page's layout seamless and organised. In regards to the fonts, Charlie Hale has spotted the use of feminine colours will appeal to a female audience. The advert at the bottom of the page "isn't too distracting" as stated by Mr Matthews, therefore, I will keep the advert in its place. Furthermore, Seb Dinsmore has suggested to changing the text underneath the title "Win Tickets.." to a smaller size to make it more readable. Further improvements included adding pictures to the page and/or changing the colours of the text to make it stand out. These are elements to consider in the making of my final contents page.
Nina
07.04.17
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