Friday, 17 March 2017

Double Page Spread Draft and Feedback

Hello!



This is a draft of my double page spread. The main image I used is different from what I was initially going to use as I thought this photo would suit my DPS more as it is similar to the front cover image. However, this is just a draft and changes may still occur. I showed this to students from my class and asked for feedback. Overall, they suggested the following:

1. Stick to the colour scheme

2. Add different images of the model

3. Make sure the body text will be concise and interesting

4. Use engaging vocabulary for the header and sidebar (that will be added to my final DPS)

I am planning to take into consideration all suggestions as I agree that my double page spread lack of colour, excitement, text and language. Also, after researching on what makes a double page spread, I am thinking of adding a header that will grab the audience's attention to read the page.
Nina
17.03.17

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